i found the story to be very intriguing and with an unexpected ending. I wasn’t wrong. I was greatly impressed by the story line and the characters that were described. Eliza is a true inspiration, and most importantly a person with a huge heart. The powers she received were used for a good cause, and as we all saw, the good defeated the evil in the end.
If it were a game with such a story line it would be great. What I've read now offers great visuals and a nice mix of battle, adventure and problem solving, which should combine a game that aims to capture a gamer's attention. The characters are well chosen, the story line captures the attention of the reader. Eliza is a true fighter and an example of self-sacrifice for what she holds dear and what she loves, Such stories should inspire. Good always defeats evil. We're waiting for a "to be continued....."
The fight with Malikar was a cliffhanger. It kept me on the edge of the seat. An innocent girl, an unsual power and a mysterious villain; it's a recipe for a great story.
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Brilliant story. It has very much depth!
An immersive story where the character goes through evolution. Trully a marvelous story.
Thank you very much.
The adventure Eliza is going through is full of heartbreaking events. Love it!
Thank you very much, happy to see that you enjoyed it.
It'a a really epic story with a good protagonist, I like how the choice are made, and the final battle was really cool, keep up the good work!
Happy to see your feedback, thank you for the effort to read my creation and appreciate it.
i found the story to be very intriguing and with an unexpected ending. I wasn’t wrong. I was greatly impressed by the story line and the characters that were described. Eliza is a true inspiration, and most importantly a person with a huge heart. The powers she received were used for a good cause, and as we all saw, the good defeated the evil in the end.
Appreciate your feedback, happy that you enjoyed my creation.
If it were a game with such a story line it would be great. What I've read now offers great visuals and a nice mix of battle, adventure and problem solving, which should combine a game that aims to capture a gamer's attention. The characters are well chosen, the story line captures the attention of the reader. Eliza is a true fighter and an example of self-sacrifice for what she holds dear and what she loves, Such stories should inspire. Good always defeats evil. We're waiting for a "to be continued....."
Thank you for your feedback. It's so grateful to see comments like this.
The fight with Malikar was a cliffhanger. It kept me on the edge of the seat. An innocent girl, an unsual power and a mysterious villain; it's a recipe for a great story.
Thank you very much, happy to see positive feedback.